Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative? Chris and Abdul had been the best of friends ever since Abdul's family moved to Grove Street, just two houses away from Chris's family. They played on the same football team, liked the same video games, and were both born in July (but Chris was eight days older than Abdul). One morning, as they walked to school together, the guy came out and began yelling at them for no reason. Not this again! thought Chris. Abdul made a face at the guy, which Chris found rather funny. A. Explaining how Chris and Abdul know each other B. Describing Grove Street in more detail C. Introducing the character who is yelling
