Question

Which is the best peer review of the paragraph below? Another example of how Frankenstein's passion led to death is Elizabeth's death. The monster that Frankenstein created in his passion for science murdered the woman for whom he had great passion. In this case, two of Frankenstein's passions, one intellectual and one amorous, combined to result in Elizabeth's death. A. This is pretty short. You should add more. B. Your sentence variety is not very good in this paragraph. Reword the second sentence so it doesn't start with the subject. C. The argument is good, but you need to add textual evidence of the two passions to back it up.

Answer 1

Answer:

It IS C

Explanation:

I just re did this assignment on Plato.

Also here are some extra answers for the other questions in the assignment.

Which is NOT an example of textual evidence?

A.  

quotes from the text

B.  

paraphrasing from the text

 C.  

themes from the text ---------- This is Right

D.  

none of the above

And

Select the correct answer.

What is the final thing a good peer reviewer should do?

 A.  

read for spelling and grammar errors

 B.  

summarize problems and suggestions--------- This is right

 C.  

note the good things about the essay

 D.  

check the validity of the thesis statement