Read the body paragraph from an argumentative essay on Louisiana's economy . 1) To better understand the current state of the economy it is helpful to look at one business as a case study. 2) Five years ago, Paul's Pizza was a struggling restaurant 3) It was suffering in a ways. 4 ) Today, the business has dozens of workers . 5) It has become so profitable the owner recently opened a second location
What would be the best way to revise sentence 3?
Change it to a more respectful tone.
Fix the spelling and punctuation errors.
Add vivid imagery or descriptive details.
Maintain the focus in the topic sentence.
