Read the paragraph below carefully and answer the question that follows.
My name is Maddox Smith. I am the Treasurer of the San Marcos High School Charity Club. "We're having a
canned food drive. This event is going to be off the hook and raise lots of dough for the homeless peeps.
Sit's just two weeks away and I am writing to ask for your help. The Charity Club is planning to place
collection boxes for canned food items at various local stores. We'd love it If you would allow us to place a
bin at Shop Mart. All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to
local families who are really, super poor.
Choose the revision of sentence 8 that is most appropriate for a persuasive proposal.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are in need of the service.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really needy.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who do not have any money or
food
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who can't afford food because
they spend their money unwisely
The sentence is appropriate as is.
