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Read the sentence below and answer the question that follows. Rick Allen joined Def Leppard in 1978, and he was in a car accident, and he lost his arm, and he has a special drum set, and he still drums for Def Leppard. What is wrong with the sentence?

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The sentence is a run on sentence with too many 'ands' and no commas. 

Answer: It has excessive coordination.

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