Can someone please help me proofread this paragraph? (Please don't criticize my writing! I know it's horrible, so there is no need to tell me.)
I would suggest the Encyclopedia Britannica article as a resource for my friend’s essay. The first reason for my recommendation is that the article provides the reader with essential information that only focuses main events, such as Ben Carson’s career and accomplishments. Providing the reader only with significant knowledge enables them to understand the main idea of the text effortlessly, making the process of writing an essay a lot easier. The Ben Carson interview, on the other hand, includes information that is not necessary for the reader to know, such as Dr. Carson’s thoughts and reactions to personal experiences. Not to mention, the interview is too verbose, making it hard for a person to realize what the main point of the writing is, or what details to include in their essay. My second reason for my recommendation is that the Encyclopedia Britannica article contains a limited amount of details, providing the reader with just the right amount of information they need to know about Ben Carson. Meanwhile, the Ben Carson interview gives the person too many details about his experiences, most of which they do not need to know. Including only what it necessary ensures that the writing is not too wordy and makes it simple to understand. My last reason for my recommendation is that the Ben Carson interview uses descriptive language, possibly making the writing confusing or, once again, too verbose. The
Encyclopedia Britannica is easy to read and comprehend and the author uses straightforward and technical language.
