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The meadow which was covered with yellow,blue and white flowers was a beautiful sight.The native grasses were thriving because the whole area,barring only the pasture had become a registered nature reserve.In fact,it was so pretty that I tried to take a picture,but when I saw that my phone battery had died.Disappointed, I walked back to the hotel to recharge it.

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The meadow which was covered with yellow, blue and white flowers was a beautiful sight. The native grasses were thriving because the whole area, barring only the pasture had become a registered nature reserve. In fact, it was so pretty that i tried to take a picture, but when i saw that, my phone battery had died. Disappointed, i walked back to the hotel to recharge it.
The meadow, which was covered with yellow, blue and white flowers, was a beautiful sight.The native grasses were thriving because the whole area, barring only the pasture, had become a registered nature reserve.In fact,it was so pretty that I tried to take a picture when I saw that my phone battery had died.Disappointed, I walked back to the hotel to recharge it.