Hey, Ms. Wilson! I know you're way hung up on American history, and that's why you assigned us this paper on the Civil War. Well, I am also a fan of American history. I think it's important for us to know our history. Therefore, I wrote this paper about the Emancipation Proclamation. Did you know that President Lincoln had long had the goal of emancipating all slaves?
What rules of writing has the writer of this paper ignored?