Question

Identify the sentence or sentences in the passage below that should be either rewritten or removed. The play A Midsummer Night's Dream opens with romantic love gone awry. Shakespeare wrote the play. An asymmetry of emotions is immediately established: Demetrius loves Hermia, Hermia loves Lysander, and Lysander loves Hermia. To complicate matters, enter another woman, Helena, who loves Demetrius. Now, we have one woman loved by two men and one woman loved by no man at all. If only there were a way to shift the affections of one man to the unfortunate Helena, then all would be righted

Answer 1

The first one should be fixed...The second one should be gone the fourth one has got to be fixed

Answer 2

The answer to your question would be that the sentences in the passage below that should be rewritten or removed are the following ones:

- The play A Midsummer Night's Dream opens with romantic love gone awry (rewritten)

- Shakespeare wrote the play (removed)

- To complicate matters, enter another woman, Helena, who loves Demetrius (rewritten)

- If only there were a way to shift the affections of one man to the unfortunate Helana, then all would be righted (rewritten).