Respuesta :
if your writing an essay first start with a good intro name some facts left and right make it seem long when its not then maker sure you have a really good concluding sentence and your set
Answer:
There needs to be some slight improvements.
Explanation:
Since you're writing an essay, this is a bit too informal. instead of writing "PUNK/ALTERNATIVE" you should write it out fully, "punk or alternative".
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