(Introduction)
Hook:
Bridge:
Thesis:
(Body paragraph #1)
Topic Sentence:
Concrete detail (Family responsibilities):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
Concrete detail (Family responsibilities):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
Concluding Sentence
(Body paragraph #2)
Topic Sentence:
Concrete detail (Work responsibilities):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
Commentary (opinion on responsibility):
