Question

Select the style most effective for a suspenseful story?

a.The tough guys were bigger and tougher and William was nervous.
b. William watched quietly as the big guys advanced slowly toward him.
c. William gulped. They were coming, and he was really worried.
d. They were upon him instantly. William gulped nervously. He then smiled slowly.

Answer 1

I would say c because it makes me want to find out what's going to happen next but I'm not sure

Answer 2

Answer:

D. They were upon him instantly. William gulped nervously. He then smiled slowly.

Explanation:

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