Sowheneveryou'reabouttoscoffyoursnacks,pulloutintotrafficorclicksend,pauseforamomentandremembertheage-oldmaximmannersmakethman. where to put colons and semicolons
And spaces too. Also there are already some colons in there. It's really difficult to actually read it, so spaces are definitely needed. Don't know if this helps at all, just helping you to improve your English.
