Question

Which revision would make the following sentence correct?
Karen is a powerful singer, she always touches the men, women, and children who hear her.
A.Karen is powerful singer; she always touches the men, women, and children who hear her.
B.Karen is powerful singer, and she always touches the men, women, and children who hear her.
C.Karen is powerful singer, always touches the men, women, and children who hear her.
D. all of the above

Answer 1

A. Karin is a powerfull singer, she always touches the men, women, and children who hear her.

Answer 2

Answer:

The answer to your question would be that the revision that makes the sentence correct is the following one: Karen is a powerful singer, and she always touches the men, women, and children who hear her (B).  

Explanation:

In the sentence above, a comma is required. When two independent sentences are joined by a coordinating conjunction (such as and) , a comma is required before the conjunction. If the comma is not included, then the sentence becomes a run-on sentence.