Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:
Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?
A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.
