A student is writing an article for a newsletter. The student wants to revise the draft to improve its organization. Read the draft and complete the task that follows.
The majority of the people you meet have trouble remembering names. It is also likely that you have trouble remembering the names of the people you meet. However, rest assured that there is one simple technique everyone can
try when learning new names. When you learn someone's name for the first time, try turning the person's name into a rhyming phrase or a phrase with an association. For example, a man named Brad just moved in next door. When I
learned his name I immediately thought of "Brad the Dad" since he is a father. Now whenever I see him I think of the whole phrase "Brad the Dad." If you cannot make it a rhyming phrase at least make it a phrase with some sort of
association. "Brad the Lawyer" is more memorable than just "Brad". This technique of building phrases will surely help you to remember people's names.
The underlined transition sentence needs revising. Which sentence is the best choice to replace the underlined sentence?
A
For instance, "Brad the Lawyer" is more memorable than just "Brad".
As a result, "Brad the Lawyer" is more memorable than just "Brad".
Furthermore, "Brad the Lawyer" is more memorable than just "Brad".
For this reason, "Brad the Lawyer" is more memorable than just "Brad".
B
C
D
