Question

as a result of a volcanic eruption, the sky god enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. enkai wanted to save his cattle. he grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. the cattle walked down the tree to neiterkob. neiterkob and the maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle. why does the summary need to be revised? the summary incorrectly restates the myth. the summary includes too many minor details. the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas. the summary is missing important words and phrases.

Answer 1

The summary need to be revised as  the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.

Because There is a mention of the earth in it. There is a mention of the sky in it. It makes mention of the tribe's beginnings. One word, a phrase, a sentence, or a whole paragraph can serve as a transition. It performs the same function in every instance: First, the transition either explicitly or subtly summarizes the topic of a previous phrase, clause, or section (by reminding the reader of what has come before).

Transitional phrases and words serve to connect concepts, sentences, and paragraphs. Transitions improve the flow of a piece of writing. They can bring disparate ideas together into a coherent whole and keep the reader from getting bogged down in the plot.

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