Question

13. Sentence 9: In addition to the sounds of
nature, you'll hear music blasting tired
children crying and laughter roaring
twenty-four hours a day.
Which of the following is the best way to
write the underlined portion of this
sentence? If you think the original is the
best way, choose option (1).

Answer 1

The proper way to revise the underlined section of this sentence is:
music blasting, tired children crying and..." Hence the correct answer from the attached image is (Option 4).

What was the significant revision?

The major revision done was to correctly commas to separate the ideas being enumerated.

Another great way to state them would have been to itemize them in bullet points.

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