Question

1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them

What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?
a. Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.
b. The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.”
c. In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.
d. The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.

Answer 1

Im like 98% sure its answer C. 

Answer 2

Answer:

The correct answer is C

Explanation:

The reason why C has the problem that need to be fixed is because a person cannot speak about himself/herself by using this type of pronouns. Instead, she should have used the first person of the personal pronoun (I). The correct answer would be: "Everyday, I walk to school with them".