PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK GOOD ANSWERS For one, one of my many motives for trying to get into honors English is that English is my favorite subject as well as the class will higher my chance of getting into honors 8th grade which will do the same thing in high school and I could get credits for honors English and will look better on my “college application” And that is my reasoning for applying for honors English 7th-grade class.
It is a good reason t0 choose me as I bring a lot to the classroom with my skills. Some of my skills are that I work well with others and I am a hard worker who turns in quality work on time and that's why I would be a good addition to the classroom.
I also enjoy reading which is a bonus as some of my 7th-grade friends have told me that we do a lot of reading in your classroom. I have already acknowledged the requirements and can confirm that I meet all those standards. I would really appreciate it if you would consider me as one of your honorable English candidates.
Get rid of the “For one”. After “trying to get into honors English” say “is because i not only enjoy the subject, but it is also my favorite to learn”. After “favorite subject” add a period and say “The class will also higher my”
