Question

Read the sentence.

My sister and I happily packed for a camping trip while our dad was at the store.

Which revision varies the sentence by beginning it with an adverb?

The camping trip, which we happily packed for while our dad was at the store, was next week.
Happily, my sister and I packed for a camping trip while our dad was at the store.
While our dad was at the store, my sister and I happily packed for a camping trip.

Answer 1

The best revision for this sentence is "Happily, my sister and I packed for a camping trip while our dad was at the store."

What is the problem with the original sentence?

The original sentence places stars with the subject "my sister and I" (people acting) rather than with an adverb (a word that describes how the action occurs).

How can the sentence be revised?

The best would be to move the adverb "happily" to the beginning as in "Happily, my sister and I packed for a camping trip while our dad was at the store."

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