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Summary: Welcome to the crazy world of Alex. His world of superheroes ,With Shadow in lead of the old oni tribe how will Alex and his friends defeat them. There are some questions Alex wants to ask about his family, where he came from ,and how he is like this.But who will he ask and is that person right there…..

Chapter 1
WELCOME

My name is Alex. Alex Baron and I am the Raven. Wait, you might not know what that means. Just so you know I am not a bird, I am a shadow spirit. A shadow spirit is an evil spirit but I don’t use my power for evil I use it for good and for the people I love.

So let me break it down for you there are four groups of “superheros.”
We have spirits, shadows spirits, Elemental, and monsters like witches and werewolves. So at this point you're wondering why I'm telling this story because I am the strongest “superhero”so I have a lot on my shoulders. Let me explain, My dad is unknown and my mom is well…. I Don’t have a clue about my family. All I have left is my younger sister Lizze who is the Fox and my older sister Lily who is the Crimson Witch. We all live together and alone because we lost our grandparents because of the Cube. The Cube is a facility that is anti-super and they make a harmful gas called Cubegas that makes people go crazy and spread hate.Because of this gas we have lost our only brother which has an army of oni and is trying to kill me because you know I have A lot of power that he wants so he can do….whatever he wants to do but all I know It is not going to be good

I (16) love this story so far. I'm also a writer, director, producer, overall film and story artist. I think you have some great potential here for a great story. If you have any questions about it, or want help working on parts or reviewing it, message me. I would love to hear more about this story.

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