Question

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In this activity, you will rewrite a passage to incorporate transitions, using one subordinating conjunction, one coordinating conjunction, and one introductory phrase.

Rewrite the following passage so that it uses at least one subordinating conjunction, one coordinating conjunction, and one introductory phrase to transition between ideas.
Passage
The American Dream is simply just a dream. Many people's earning potential has been stunted. It's harder and harder to find a job as unemployment rates soar. The jobs that are available pay less.

Answer 1

Answer:

The American Dream is just that: a fantasy. The earning capacity of many individuals has indeed been stifled. As unemployment rates rise, it is becoming increasingly difficult to find work. The various employment is low-paying.

Explanation:

"as" is the subordinating conjunction

"has indeed" is the introductory phrase

"and" is the coordinating conjunction