Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay? I just wanted to know if it flows good and if Im giving a good explanation. (If there is something wrong or if I need to add please tell me!)

Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay I just wanted to know if it flows good and if Im giving a good explanation If there is something wrong or if I nee class=
Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay I just wanted to know if it flows good and if Im giving a good explanation If there is something wrong or if I nee class=
Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay I just wanted to know if it flows good and if Im giving a good explanation If there is something wrong or if I nee class=