Read the sentences from a student’s essay about “The Treasure of Lemon Brown.”
In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on Greg by showing him the value of the bond between fathers and sons. Greg then appreciates his own father better, despite his father’s shortcomings.
What is the best way to revise the last sentence?
replace “Greg then” with “In conclusion, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “Therefore, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “Consequently, Greg”
replace “Greg then” with “So, Greg”
