Question

is this a good poem?? Ah, my mother's perfume,
As she walks it fills the rooms,
Smells just like a flower’s bloom,
On a hot sunny day in june,
And it's the beautiful smell my nostrils consume,
And this perfume belong to whom?
It is my mothers perfume

Answer 1

Answer:its a really nice poem i like it

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

As she walks, it fills the rooms.

It smells just like a flower’s bloom,

On a hot, sunny day in June,

And it's the beautiful smell my nostrils consume.

And does this perfume belong to whom?

It is my mother's perfume.

Explanation:

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