what do you think of the intro to my spin off of the maze runner its just the prologue so far. (project for English)
The wind is cold on my back and sounds as if it is crying to me. The leaves are creepier. They made no sound when I stepped on them or when my feet moved them around. The gravelly path crunched softly under my feet. Then I heard it, the voice of my little sister. “One, two, three, the trees can See, Four, five, six, you better run quick. You can run, you can hide, but the Grievers always find.” By the time she stopped speaking, I was Sprinting through the forest, my heart thumping in my chest and my feet aching, but I don't slow down for fear of being caught. I can feel its eyes on me, hear its talon-like feet stomping against the ground behind me. I don’t even stop to see how far behind me it is. I was close enough to the wall that I could see it slowly closing, I sense rather than see what’s going on, and dodge the large scorpion stinger that the griever tries to sting me with. I was getting closer to the wall, and it kept closing, I could see Newt and the others Shouting for me to run faster. My eyes were glued to Newts. I wasn’t going to make it. A tear runs down my cheek and I scream as the wall closes behind me. I hear Newt. “Blue!!”
