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Read the following sentences, which need revising, editing, and proofreading:
Cocconut oil. Trendy. But healthy? Americans (72%) think so. Experts say not so fast: lots of fat, lots of calories, not
enough proof of benefits.
Which revision below is most effective?
O Most Americans think coconut oil is healthy, but experts say it is bad for you because its high in fat and calories.
O 72% of Americans think coconut oil is healthy. Experts aren't in that group, saying the trendy oil has fat and calories.
Coconut oil is trendy, but is it healthy? While 72% of Americans think it's better for you than other oils, nutritionists
O disagree. They say more research is needed to determine if the oil provides enough benefits to balance out its high fat and
calorie content.
has lots
Coconut oil is trendy right now, but maybe it isn't as healthy as 72% of Americans think. Experts think coconut
of fat and lots of calories, and there isn't proof of benefits.

Respuesta :

The third answer option is the one that presents efficient proofreading for the presented text.

This option is:

"Coconut oil is trendy, but is it healthy? While 72% of Americans think it's better for you than other oils, nutritionists disagree. They say more research is needed to determine if the oil provides enough benefits to balance out its high fat and calorie content."

We can arrive at this answer because:

  • Reviewing a text means making it more coherent and fluid with all the necessary information that was presented later.
  • In this case, the text shown in the question needs to be revised to become more coherent and allow for a fluid and well-established reading.
  • However, all information in this text must be presented in the revised text.

The only answeroption that can meet all of these requirements is the third answer option.

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