Hiya, I'm writing an essay on "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar" for my honors class! Can someone just proof read this? Does it sound okay?? :)

In "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar" the author, William Shakespear, really highlights the perception of morals and how it can affect a society or a specific person. You can see how the idea of morals is used by judging the actions of Brutus, Cassius, Antony, and the rest of the conspirators. William Shakespeare really made for a dramatic betrayal through Brutus’s perception of right and wrong, his basic morals. The theme was hit on a lot by using different perceptions and perspectives of this huge event, it was all really about how morals can affect people and the society as a whole depending on how big of a decision.

To begin, the theme is seen as the conspirators first approach Brutus with the offer to join them. This starts the debate of morally right and morally wrong. Was it morally right or wrong to kill Caesar? This question was often debated by Brutus. Cassius then proceeds to send Brutus fake letters, leading Brutus to only further debate. Eventually, the decision is made. Brutus comes to the conclusion that it would be morally right to kill Caesar.

Brutus was deceived by the conspirators, leading him to believe them. Brutus helps them carry out the assassination because he truly believed that it would be morally right to rid Rome of Casear, having seen that his friend was slowly becoming a tyrant, wanting to dictate Rome, keeping all of Asia under his control wouldn’t be hard with such power.


Please keep in mind this is due tmr and I'm in an honor class that grades tough :0

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In "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar," the author, William Shakespeare, really highlights the perception of morals and how it can affect society or a specific person. You can see how the idea of morals is used by judging the actions of Brutus, Cassius, Antony, and the rest of the conspirators. William Shakespeare made a dramatic betrayal through Brutus’s perception of right and wrong, his basic morals. The theme was hit on a lot by using different perceptions and perspectives of this monumental event; it was all about how morals can affect people and society, depending on how big of a decision.


To begin, the theme is seen as the conspirators first approach Brutus with the offer to join them. This starts the debate of morally right and morally wrong. Was it morally right or wrong to kill Caesar? Brutus often debated this question. Cassius then proceeds to send Brutus fake letters, leading Brutus to only further debate. Eventually, the decision is made. Brutus concludes that it would be morally right to kill Caesar.


Brutus was deceived by the conspirators, leading him to believe them. Brutus helps them assassinate because he genuinely thought it would be morally right to rid Rome of Caesar. Seeing that his friend was slowly becoming a tyrant, wanting to dictate Rome, keeping all of Asia under his control wouldn’t be complicated with such power.


Hope this helps!

Answer: This is actually pretty good. Awesome grammar. Big vocab terms.

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