agonzalez399 agonzalez399

18-11-2021
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Hi! I have an essay that I want to be proofread and if you could let me know what to change, it would help. Thank you!

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Your0mothers0slut Your0mothers0slut

18-11-2021

The essay is really good but maybe for the last sentence you can put 'in conclusion we should defund the police departments because of the overall statistics of the injustice"

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