hay guys does this sound good? I am writing an outline for a grade!


Paragraph 1
Idea 1 Skye is mean cruel selfish
Idea 2 Princess hears of this and puts her to the test
Idea 3 Skye fails test to show kindness
Idea 4 Elaina is poor but gives all she has

Paragraph 2
Idea 1 Princess calls Skye and Elaina to her palace and reveals test
Idea 2 The Princess gives them both what they deserve

Moral and or lesson : All things . . . that you want men to do to you, you also must do to them.”—MATT. 7:12.

Respuesta :

yes you just need to work a little harder 
Sounds pretty good to me nice work