Question

Add adjectives to improve the following passage. The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

Answer 1

Answer:

the man quickly stopped by the park to pet the dog. then he stepped onto the bus. the bus made several short stops before it pulled in front of a restaurant. he swiftly jumped out and ran up the steps. a while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

Explanation:

hi! im not sure if this is what its asking but this is the most grammatical and adjective heavy to write this paragraph :)