Read the following text from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her word choice?
My favorite shows are shows about science. A good science show should demonstrate how to do experiments. More importantly, a science show should have a host that is really excited about science. If the host of a science show is excited, it makes the people at home excited too. Even if you think you don't like science, you should try watching some of the science shows that I watch. You'll get to learn more about science and how it's done.
