Question

Which of the following would be the best way to correct this sentence? The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a Locomotive or the way you can see your breathe on a cold day. The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a Locomotive or the way you can see your breath on a cold day. The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a locomotive or the way you can see your breath on a cold day. The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky, is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a locomotive, or the way you can see your breath on a cold day. The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a Locomotive, or the way you can see your breathe on a cold day.

Answer 1

I believe the best way to rewrite the sentence is the last option: "The idea behind the formation of clouds in the sky is the same idea behind the way steam rises from a Locomotive, or the way you can see your breathe on a cold day." This is because it is the only sentence that doesn't sound like a run-on sentence. It also has correct grammar.