Question

Which change would most improve his introduction?
Read Diego's introduction to his rhetorical analysis
essay
A man looks out at a million intense faces. They have
traveled from far and wide to hear his words. They
have come with family and friends and now unite with
strangers converging on the green. The swelling crowd
is silent as he begins to speak. As his words ring out
across the National Mall, hearts swell and tears begin
to fall. It is a new era in history. Martin Luther King Jr.'s
"I Have a Dream" speech sends a mighty message that
is particularly effective due to its use of analogy,
anaphora, and parallelism.
O adding an effective hook at the end to make sure the
audience is engaged
O adding historical information to provide more
background
O adding a clear thesis statement to underscore the
ideas presented
O adding rhetorical questions to emphasize the claim
that King's message is powerful

Answer 1

Answer:

Adding historical information to provide more

background

Explanation:

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Answer 2

The story is lack in telling the background of man, so adding an effective hook at the end to make sure the audience is engaged.

What is an essay in story format?

A narrative essay describes a story. mostly a story about a personal experience you had. This kind of essay, along with the explanatory essay, allows you to get personal and innovative, not like most academic writing.

Thus,  adding an effective hook at the end to make sure the audience is engaged.

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