Today I learned some sick stuff about volcanoes the hot dangerous stuff comes out of the top where sometimes goes boom the red stuff can be sticky and runny these things cause lots of damage but they can help out sometimes too
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Today, I learned some cool things about volcanoes. The hot and dangerous stuff comes out from the top. Sometimes it explodes and the red stuff can be sticky and runny. These things can cause a lot of damage, but they can help out too.