Question

read the following statement from a lecture by a history teacher: "when i went to hawaii last year, i visited the pearl harbor memorial. i was struck by the solemness of the displays and pictorials. four battleships and two destroyers were sunk, many more were badly damaged, and there were more than 2000 casualties. it really made me consider the horror of war and how it must have felt to be there on december 7, 1941, when it was all happening." reformulate this statement into an appropriate form which could be written in your notes.

Answer 1

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visiting Hawaii ladt year to visit the Peal Harbor Memorial, I was struck by the solemness of dispkays and pictorials. Considering the immense destruction and loss of life (6 ships sunk, more damaged, 2000 lives lost) illustrated the horrors of war and the impactbon those present atvthe battle.

Explanation:

good to make the prose flow as you would naturally speak, rather than make a list of points.

Answer 2

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I visited the Pearl Harbor Memorial last year.
The attack was on Dec. 7, 1941.
4 battleships were sunk and 2 destroyers were sunk, a lot more was damaged. There was 2000+ casualties.