Question

Read the excerpt from Erika’s letter to her mayor, arguing that the city should improve its recycling program.

Imposing stricter recycling regulations would greatly benefit our city in many ways.

Which is the best revision of the underlined portion of the sentence?
would be a totally beneficial thing to do.
would be great and I’ll tell you why.
would be pretty great for our city for many reasons.
no change

Answer 1

Answer:

No Change

Explanation:

The example sentence is grammatically correct.

Answer 2

Answer:

No change

Explanation:

I believe the underlined sentence is:

would greatly benefit our city in many ways.

It should be left alone as the final sentence since it has no grammatical errors and sounds professional than the other revision sentences given. Especially because this is written for the mayor, it should sound professional and concise.

Hope this helps!