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(1) We are sorry to say that we will not be able to publish your short story "Max versus the Robots in the school literary magazine. (2) Our editorial board enjoyed the story's creative setting and interesting characters. (3) However, the board ultimately decided that the plot was too confusing, and several members found the ending to be implausible. (4) In addition, some readers were concerned that the technical details about robots were totally boring. (5) Although we have to reject this story, we hope to publish your work in the future, so please submit a story to us again. Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout? (T) A. Replace sentence 4 with: In addition, some readers were concerned that the technical details about robots would not be of interest to most students. B. Replace sentence 2 with: The creative setting was enjoyed by the board, and the interesting characters were appreciated bynbe board as well! c. Replace sentence 5 with: While it is with great regret that we must rebuff your literary endeavor, we would like to disseminate a future opus penned by you If you would be so kind as to dispatch an additional work to us for our consideration. 0 D. Replace sentence 3 with: But the editorial board ultimately decided that the plot was too confusing, and several members had no clue what the deal was with the ending,​