Question

Read the sentence
The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed, and she wanted all the memos to be typed so that they would be easy to read
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?
The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed and also easy to read
The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed and she wanted all of them to be typed so that they would be easy
to read
The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed so they would be easy to read
The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed because she wanted all the memos to be easy to read

Answer 1

Answer:

The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed so they would be easy to read.

Explanation:

Let's break this down. The sentence "The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed, and she wanted all the memos to be typed so that they would be easy to read." isn't a correct way of explaining what's happening in this sentence. When you revise a sentence, you need to make sure it makes to the reader. Therefore, the correct answer is "The office manager wanted all the memos to be typed so they would be easy to read."