Question

Write this paragraph out again and try to improve it by replacing some of the nouns
with pronouns.
The twins could never agree, so the twins would often argue. Their older sister didn't like the
constant arguing, so their older sister wore her headphones most of the
time!

Answer 1

Answer:

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Explanation:

the twins could never agree, so they would often argue. Their older sister didn't like the constant arguing, so she wore her headphones most of the time!

the twins and their older sister are nouns and you use the noun first before you use the pronoun so that the reader knows who or what the pronoun is.

I am sorry if this is wrong or doesn't help you but I hope it does