Question

What am i missing on this?
my teacher said why they became communist but I'm out of ideas. can someone pls help i need it. The first pic is prompt and the next is my work. also if you just wanna read over it that's fine. No fake answers or Links tho.

Answer 1

the Bolsheviks took control. They were dedicated to a version of Marxism developed by Vladimir Lenin. It promised the workers would rise, destroy capitalism, and create a socialist utopia under the leadership of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union.