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Explanation:
I would flip in addition and first in order to have it make sense numarically (1st second, third, kind of deal) but otherwise I think it looks okay?
you could also go FIRST, IN ADDITION, IN FACT, then IN CONCLUSION and it could flow better. This order would make it go 1st, second, 3rd (transition), 4th (final) which could be what the assignment is looking for.
Hope this helps!
