Question

“So, then it was, like, my turn to try the new machine thingy. It was, ummm, so sweet!”

Identify the problem language in this statement and then rewrite the statement to correct the problem.

Answer 1

Answer:

Problem words: like, ummm, and thingy

Explanation:

Rewrite it:

So then it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!

Answer 2

Answer:

To re-put it you can say, "Then, it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!"

Explanation:

The original way they put it had to many commas