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Read the following paragraph and answer the question:

The day I got my first job, I was thrilled. Though I was still a teenager, I felt like I was suddenly part of the larger picture; I had become an adult. A contributing member of society. By walking into an establishment, filling out an application, speaking to a manager, and accepting a part-time position, I felt I had finally entered the real world.


Which of the following is a correction for the sentence fragment in the paragraph?

The day I got my first job. I was thrilled.
I was a contributing member of society.
By walking into an establishment.
Filling out an application. Speaking to a manager.

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Answer: The day I got my first job. I was thrilled.

Explanation:

In the original paragraph this would be considered a run on sentence, hence you would need a semi colon. However, there was none implied.

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