Question

What is the best change we can make to this sentence?
When I opened my present I let out a yell.

Answer 1

Answer:

I let out a scream? maybe, because yell sound like its scary, so maybe "When I opened my present I let out a scream of joy"

Explanation:

Answer 2

When i opened this mysterious present, my stomach begun to flutter, I was excited but nervous of what could be inside. As soon I opened it I let out a a squeal that deafened my own ears.