Question

Plz rewrite this passage using a narrative adding dialogue and imagery to create a nervous tone:

My sibling Felipe and I approached the unwanted house toward the finish of the road. Felipe opened the door, and we strolled forward. We strolled as far as possible up to the entryway and thumped, however, nobody replied. I hung over the railing and glanced in the window, and it was really unfilled in there. At that point, there was a commotion inside the house, and we left.?

Answer 1

Answer:

My sibling Felipe and I approached the unwanted house toward the finish of the road.

"Felipe, open the door." He opened the door, and we strolled forward.

We strolled as far as possible up to the entryway and thumped.

"Hello, is anybody here?" I asked, hoping for someone to answer.

However, nobody replied.

I hung over the railing and glanced in the window, and it was really unfilled in there.

"Hey, are you feeling something?" Felipe asked.

At that point, there was a commotion inside the house.

Out of fear, we hurriedly left the house.

Explanation:

I wish I helped, I did my best XD