Question

"I do not dislike golf or tennis, and I actually enjoy swimming; yet while these may be sports that one can pursue long after his or her youth is gone, they can in no way replace the value of team sports." What changes, if any, should be made in this sentence?

Answer 1

this sentence seems grammatically correct, but it’s wordy. if this is your sentence in an essay or something, i’d recommend splitting it into two. it could be something like “i do not dislike golf or tennis, and I actually enjoy swimming. Still, they can in no way replace the value of team sports.”