Read this rough draft.
Alice gets more grown up on her journey through the Looking-Glass land, like how she does not cry as much toward the end.
Revise this draft to reflect a formal style.
A : Alice gets more grown up on her journey through the Looking-Glass land, because she does not cry always toward the end.
B : Alice gets more grown up on her journey through the Looking-Glass land; she does not get all emotional toward the end.
C : Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-Glass land; for example, she learns to control her emotions.
D : Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-Glass land, and she even does not cry toward the end.
