Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence? Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets, and the jets were still on the ground.
A. Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets while the jets were still on the ground.

B. Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets, yet the jets were still on the ground.

C. The jets still on the ground, Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets.

D. The German jets still on the ground during Allied bombing raids were destroyed by them.

Respuesta :

Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets while the jets were still on the ground.

Answer:

A). Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets while the jets were still on the ground.

Explanation:

As per the question, the revision that corrects the malfunctioning in the sentence is displayed in option A as it best compliments and comprehends the meaning of the sentence. The other options are either manipulating the meaning of the sentence by adjusting the clauses or reflecting a grammatical error that ruins the actual meaning of the statement. Option B falsely employs 'yet' and 'still' in a single clause while option C incorrectly substitutes the phrases without using any conjunction and option D inappropriately uses the preposition 'during' as a conjunction. Thus, only option A offers an effective and meaningful sentence without any errors.

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